Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Reversi

This one's a little bit weird. It was written from bottom up ((Thus, I have taken out the punctuation so that it makes more sense reading from both directions––Or less from one, and more from the other?)).

That said, read it through going down, and then read it again going back up, and tell me which one you prefer!



Smiling all the while
As nighttime wanders on
While cicadas begin to cry
The green grass in my hair

As a lightning flash
But all I see is bright
As the tempest rushes by
Trees sway in the wind

For it is a full moon
The clouds, too, have left
The city lights are out
The orange glow is gone, tonight

Just waiting for it to pass
I see their glow from where I lay
Smiling all the while
The celestial bodies begin to float
As nighttime wanders by

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  2. I like reading it from the bottom up. Makes more sense that way.. It's a beautifully written piece.

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  3. This might be one of my favorite things you've written.

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